Lorcan took a deep breath to calm
himself. He was used to people being rude to him. He didn’t particularly like
it, but growing up in a family filled with vulgar drunks had forced him to
adapt. The villagers who came to buy alcohol were only marginally more polite
than his relatives—they thought him odd and did their best not to interact with
him. So if Luciana wanted to accuse him of being an evil traitor hell-bent on
the destruction of humanity that was hardly to be considered unexpected.
“Listen,” he told her calmly, “why
don’t I go with you and get this all cleared up with your father?”
Luciana eyed him suspiciously. “You
would come with us willingly?”
“I would much rather get this over
with quickly. Also, going with you now means I don’t have to worry about one of
my uncles getting drunk and throwing up on your father’s shoes,” Lorcan said.
“Very well. Guard him closely,” she
told her soldiers. Then Luciana mounted her horse and pulled Evie up to sit
behind her. They all started down the trail that led back to Ostfield.
Lorcan had always been comfortable
with long silences. In fact, he preferred them. As such, he rather enjoyed
their walk through the forest despite the fact that he was being guarded by
twelve angry men who believed he was an evil monster. He saw two deer, a
woodpecker, and four rabbits. He was just starting to think that their entire
journey would be a peaceful walk through nature when Evie hopped down from
Luciana’s horse to walk beside him.
“Sorry about earlier. Anna is extra
touchy about warlocks,” Evie explained. One of the soldiers had given her a
cloak to keep the rain off. It was so comically large that it dragged along the
muddy trail and threatened to trip Evie with every step she took.
Lorcan shrugged. Evie waited for
him to respond verbally. Lorcan waited longer.
“She was engaged to marry a
warlock. But nobody knew he was a warlock. Not even Mason,” Evie eventually
continued. For some reason it appeared to be vitally important to her that
Lorcan understand why Luciana acted the way she had. “He was trying to kill the
Emperor and Luciana is friends with the Emperor’s daughter, so…” She looked up
at Lorcan hopefully.
“So it’s understandable that she
has trouble trusting people now.”
Evie breathed a sigh of relief.
“Exactly! She loved Mason very much. Which is saying something, because Anna
has never been really into the whole love
thing. Even before she found out about Mason, she was still all business and no
fun.”
“I…see.” Lorcan had no real desire
to continue this conversation, but Evie seemed intent on prolonging it.
“We all liked Mason because he made
Anna smile. She, uh, doesn’t really smile.
Ever. You may have noticed she can be a bit…stern,”
Evie muttered self-consciously.
Lorcan sighed. This happened
occasionally. Without any provocation on his part, people would begin telling
him their most secret dreams and fears. “I did indeed notice that.”
“She has new suitors now, but none
of them make her laugh like Mason did. I miss seeing her laugh. I don’t miss
her being engaged to a secret assassin, but the laughter was nice.” Evie looked
quite sad for her sister.
“That’s more than enough of that,
Evie,” Luciana said from behind them.
“Anna! How did you sneak up on us?”
Evie asked, looking around guiltily.
Luciana shook her head. “You mean
how much did I hear? Just about all of it. Now, go with the guards while I take
Lorcan to see our father. You’ll have to wait here in the woods until we know
it’s safe to take you back into the village.”
Evie did as she was told and
Luciana gestured for Lorcan to lead the way. “Still don’t trust me to be out of
your sight?”
“Something like that,” Luciana
replied. They walked in silence until they reached the outskirts of Ostfield.
The village was evidently a small
flyspeck of a town compared to everywhere else, but to Lorcan it was a bustling
mass of people. Ostfield was noisy and everyone seemed to be in a rush to get
somewhere else.
“You don’t realize what you did to
Evie, do you?” Luciana asked as they stepped from the dirt trail to Weyrd
Mountain onto the cobblestones of Ostfield proper.
“Did to her? No, I’m not sure what
you’re talking about.” Lorcan suppressed a groan. One of Julian’s many feminine
admirers had spotted him and was rushing over.
“She won’t shut up around you
because you charmed her with a spell. Probably when you gave her that cloak
this morning.” Luciana’s tone was displeased, but under strict control.
“That again?” This time, Lorcan did
groan. “For the last time, I am not a
warlock. You probably couldn’t wake your men because part of Great
Grandmother’s spell was to prevent them being woken by anyone who wasn’t her
relative. She no doubt planned on standing at the window and watching you try
in vain to rouse the soldiers for hours just for her own amusement.”
Luciana did not appear convinced,
but she said nothing because Julian’s admirer had reached them. Lorcan tried
not to notice how slim and pretty the girl was. Or how blue her eyes were. And
he definitely didn’t notice how the
rain made her cloak cling to the curve of her hips.
“You’re Julian’s cousin, right?
La—um…Lanky?” The girl obviously did not remember his name.
“Lorcan,” he corrected. In all
fairness, he had no idea who she was either.
“Yeah! Lurkan. Is Julian coming
into town too?” She looked so terribly hopeful that Lorcan felt bad telling her
the truth.
“No, just me.”
“Oh.” The crestfallen youth
hurriedly left to go about her business without saying goodbye.
“Charming,” Luciana said with
evident distaste as she watched the girl go.
“It will happen again,” Lorcan
warned her. And sure enough, they were approached by seven more girls hoping to
hear that Julian was on his way before they reached the inn. After the eighth
girl had come and gone, this one close to tears after Lorcan told her the bad
news, Luciana stopped him.
“Why do all these women keep
harassing you about your cousin? Does he owe them money?”
Lorcan shook his head. “They’re
just infatuated with him. There’s a festival in a few days and they’re all
hoping Julian will ask them to accompany him.”
“All of them?” she asked, a tad
incredulous.
Lorcan nodded. “Julian is very good
looking.”
Luciana arched a skeptical eyebrow
at that. “And where is your special little lady? Will she be hunting you down
as well?”
“Special little lady?” Lorcan
asked, very confused.
“The young woman you are courting.
We’re about the same age, you should be well into your courtship by now. Or at
least your first attempt.”
“Ummmm…no. Not really.”
Luciana stared at him for a moment.
“I thought villages like this were obsessed with getting their young people
paired off, isn’t that what they have all those festivals for?”
“Well…yes, that’s true.”
“But you have no one.”
Lorcan nodded. “Correct.”
“Are you at least pursuing a girl?”
“Not…really,” Lorcan admitted
hesitantly. No one really pressured him to go courting like they did his older
cousins. His family seemed to take for granted that his awkwardness would make
him terrible at it.
Luciana’s eyes narrowed. “That is
odd. Warlocks usually…well, never mind that. Come on, my father will want to
know Evie is alright.”
The barkeep nodded to Lorcan as he
entered. Anyone who made their living selling liquor was well acquainted with Lorcan
and his family. After all, they made the best booze around.
Luciana pointed to the stairs and
Lorcan went all the way up to the third story of the inn. He had never been
anywhere but the common room, kitchen, and the storage cellar. Lorcan was
surprised by how fancy and clean everything was. He’d had no idea the Old
Fisherman Inn was capable of accommodating a more wealthy clientele than
travelling merchants.
Still keeping an eye on Lorcan,
Luciana knocked on one of the doors. The door immediately swung open and an
armored man nearly as wide as the door greeted Luciana before stepping aside to
admit them.
Lorcan looked around. This room was
nearly identical to the one he had seen in Evie’s dream last night. A broad
shouldered middle-aged man stood by the window. He was staring out at the
village square with his hands clasped behind his back.
“Yuri, leave us,” said the man who
Lorcan assumed was Luciana’s father. The massive guard left immediately. “I
assume that your early return means you located your sister. Efficient as
always, my daughter.”
Luciana addressed her father in
very formal tones. “I brought the boy who healed Evangeline’s wound. He lived
with three witches, just as you said he would.”
The Senator chuckled. “Still you
doubt the prophecies of the Divinatrix. When you visit her in a few months you
will learn the weight of her wisdom.”
“Yes, father.”
Finally, the silver-haired man
turned around. He had the same pale green eyes as Luciana and wore a neatly
trimmed goatee on his face. He gave Lorcan a look that was clear his worth was
being measured. “Allow me to introduce myself. I am Senator Garis Seafury.
Might I know the name of the young man who tended to my daughter’s injury?”
Lorcan cleared his throat
nervously. “Lorcan Moon, sir.”
“And do you know why you are here,
young Lorcan?” Lorcan had thought Luciana’s gaze was penetrating, but she had
nothing on her father’s piecing stare.
It was difficult to speak without
stumbling over his words, but Lorcan did his best not to stammer. “Evie said
you were searching for a warlock who lived with three witches here in the
Reach. But I’m not a warlock! My great grandmother, great aunt, and aunt are
all witches, but I’ve never done magic in my life.”
“And yet my daughter brings you
here to me. She knows better than most the signs of a man capable of using
magic,” Senator Seafury said in an even tone.
“It was just a quirk of Great
Grandmother’s spell,” Lorcan protested. “She put the soldiers to sleep and made
it so only one of her family members could wake them.”
The Senator shifted his gaze to his
daughter. He said nothing, but his inquiry was clear.
“He charmed Evangeline by giving
her a cloak and completely healed her wound overnight,” Luciana assured him.
Her father nodded. “And have you
noticed any of the discrepancies yet?” he asked her.
Luciana did not hesitate to think
before giving her response, she must have been ready for this question. “He
doesn’t have a girl in town that he’s courting. Even a warlock who gave up his
memories in his Dark Bargain will unconsciously or accidentally charm beautiful
women into falling in love with him. It is possible that his cousin is a
warlock. That one has at least eight attractive admirers.”
Seafury nodded. “We will
investigate him then. But you are certain this is the boy who healed
Evangeline?”
“Without a doubt,” Luciana replied.
“Then please, have a seat.” The
Senator gestured to a pair of chairs for Luciana and Lorcan. “How well do you
know your history, young Lorcan Moon?”
“Not well, sir. We have few books
on Weyrd Mountain and most of them are about monsters. My sister hogs them for
herself most of the time,” Lorcan said as they sat down.
“But surely you have heard of the
war that the Seven Golden Empires fought against Death’s Legion?”
Lorcan nodded. “Some, yes. I don’t
know which parts are true and which are just legends and exaggeration.”
Senator Seafury nodded
appreciatively. “Smart lad. So few men know what things they do not know. Will
you allow me to enlighten you?”
“Absolutely! I mean, of course,
sir,” Lorcan said eagerly. He had always loved learning new things beyond the
practical workings of the still and their farm.
“Well, as you can imagine, what is
fact and what is legend is still very disputed in the Halls of Learning, but
the story goes that long ago Death walked the land in the form of a man. Death
could raise up the dead to fight for him. Now, whether this is literally true
or if a powerful sorcerer simply discovered the secrets of necromancy for the
first time, we do not know. It has been over a thousand years and certain
stories take on a life of their own over time.
“Anyway,” he continued, “the Seven
Golden Empires formed to unite humanity against Death. They fought for over a
century, but were only victorious in the end because of the Sacrifice of the
Sorcerers. You see, back then there were sorcerers, much as there are witches
today. Men who could use magic without making a Dark Bargain. Every sorcerer
alive who had not betrayed humanity came together to launch a final attack on
Death’s Frozen Citadel far to the north. They succeeded in imprisoning Death
forever, but every last one of them perished.
“As you no doubt know, being from a
family of witches, magic is passed down from mother to daughter or
granddaughter. With all the sorcerers dead in the Sacrifice, magic essentially
died out on the male side. Despite the dreadful cost, the world celebrated its
victory. That is, until the Last Sorcerer emerged. You have heard this story as
well, yes?” Senator Seafury asked.
Lorcan nodded.
“Then you know that he was one of
Death’s most powerful servants. He had even learned the secret of immortality.
The Last Sorcerer struck while we reveled in our glorious victory. Our Empire
was nearly destroyed, but we eventually managed to beat his forces back. We
were never able to defeat him entirely, not when he had created warlocks and we
had no more sorcerers to counter the more destructive magic that men wield.”
The Senator laughed humorlessly. “Ironically, that is what saved the Empire.
Without a constant threat to keep them strong, the other six Golden Empires crumbled
over the decades and centuries that followed. Infighting, greed, and strife did
what Death could not. Now we stand, the Last Golden Empire.”
Lorcan sat, speechless. Absorbed in
the Senator’s story as he was, he had forgotten entirely about being thought a
warlock and summoned here.
Luciana, however, had done no such
thing. “You think Lorcan is a sorcerer, not a warlock.”
Her father nodded slowly.
Lorcan’s eyes bulged. “But I
thought all the sorcerers were dead. Except the evil ones, I mean. Or, evil
one, since he’s the Last Sorcerer?”
Senator Seafury spoke slowly and
with great weight. “There was a prophecy made by the Divinatrix who lived at
the time of the Sacrifice. She foretold that another sorcerer would be born to
ensure that Death remained forever imprisoned. The Divinatrix has informed the
Emperor that a time of trials is upon us. The Last Sorcerer has devised a way
to free his master and so the Emperor has sent us to search for the sorcerer
who was foretold. Prophecy says that he will be born in the Reach and dwell
among three witches.” He looked into
Lorcan with his piercing green eyes.
Lorcan gulped. “You think it’s me?”
“Time will tell,” Seafury answered.
“When I was seventeen and visited the Divinatrix for the first time, she told
me that I would find a man who could
be the sorcerer who had been foretold. She said that he would heal my youngest
child and that I was to offer him this talisman.” He pulled a necklace from his
coat pocket. It was a disc with an intricate pattern cast into it and it hung
on a sturdy silver chain. “She made special care to ensure I knew that I was to
offer it, not force him to take it.
She also told me what it does, though she did not tell me why he might need or
want it.”
Lorcan’s heart thundered in his
chest. Something about that necklace…called
to him. He wanted it very badly and that worried him. With difficulty, he
asked, “What did she say it did?”
“It will cause your strength as a
sorcerer to grow infinitely faster.” Senator Seafury held the necklace out for
Lorcan to take.
Does Lorcan take the talisman?
1) Yes!
2) Hell, no!
3) Cut it in half and take half of it.
ReplyDeleteBetter answer than "I...see" at the beginning of paragraph 12, if you're trying to end a conversation: "Okay."
I'm going with option 1. Aside from the mathematical fact that "infinitely faster" can only mean two unreasonable things--first that either he has no magic right now, so infinitely faster means that it grows at all, or second that he would immediately be all-powerful--this seems like a classic (albeit annoying) good vs evil choice in an RPG: take the power and let it corrupt you (assuming the talisman actually does grow your power and isn't some silly test), or don't take it and your choice to reject the power for some reason makes you more powerful.
However, this kind of turning point has been done dozens of times before, and good writing, anymore, means making practical choices. Either Lorcan is the chosen one and must take this duty upon himself to save humanity, and thus taking the talisman is the reasonable act, or Lorcan chooses not to be the chosen one, and this story has no reason to make Lorcan the main character, and in which case, Lorcan can take the talisman or not and he's good or evil--hard to say from this single choice--but he plays no role in saving the world (though he could play a role in destroying it). So, take it.
Okay. I think that he should do a number of things. First, he should break out into song and dance awkwardly. That should cause the Senator to change his mind about Lorcan and take back the talisman. Then he won't have to decide. Then, he should wander down to the main tavern and tell all of the ladies there where to find his cousin and offer to take them all to him. As he meanders back home, harem in tow, he should feed the particularly stupid ones to the animals and save the passable ones. Once he arrives home, he presents the women to his cousin, saying that he needs to choose one of them to take to the festival. At that point, a massive cat fight ensues and the women not only end up killing each other, but also the cousin in the process. This takes care of the possibility that Julian is an evil warlock/the harbinger of doom.
ReplyDeleteProblem solved. The universe is once again in equilibrium and everyone thinks Lorcan is insane and leaves him the heck alone.
But if I must choose.....#2. Because I hope that will cause problems for the characters later. I'm GRRMing it!
I change my vote to option 4 provided the song he sings is the Pirates Who Don't Do Anything
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